1、1学术论文的语言表达征求意见稿 总则语言风格 清晰流畅的书面语言注意向已发表的文章学习语言 专业术语必须从该领域的文献中学习避免自创的新奇语句 应注意的问题一 时态时态是个比较复杂的问题虽然有一般的规则但往往在实际文章中很难把握总体的规则已在前边讲过需要重申的是在同一段落中要避免时态跳跃详见学术论文的写作最常见的描述一般现象的时态是一般现在时 有时也用一般过去时或一般将来时需要注意的语法In recent years 作时间状语时通常要用完成时In recent years, Plesch and coworkers have concluded tha
2、t many so-called cationicpolymerizations do not proceed through intermediates of an ionic nature.二 数数也有其复杂化特别是在学术论文里有是很难顾及数上的逻辑但一般不将逻辑上的问题视为语法错误只须注意在一个句子中的数和谓语动词的统一即可以下是需要注意的语法不规则变化的单复数单数 复数criterion criteria 依据phenomenon phenomena 现象medium media 介质radius radii 半径index indices 指数appendix appendices
3、附录stimulus stimuli 刺激basis bases 基础2synthesis syntheses 合成matrix matrices 基体Novel biomaterials with improved, specific biological action are being developed using polymersthat are responsive to environmental stimuli.一些数有特殊性的名词data, kinetics 通常作复数名词research, work: 不可数名词The data in Table 1 are obtaine
4、d from the reactions at different temperatures.The kinetics of polymerization within each droplet are the same as those for the correspondingbulk polymerization.Much research has been done to redirect the tropism of retroviruses by engineering the envelopeglycoprotein.Most research on poly(ortho est
5、ers) has focused on the synthesis of polymers.一些结构的数 <主谓的统一>one of 复数名词单数none of 复数名词复数none of 单数名词/不可数名词单数no 复数名词复数no 单数名词/不可数名词单数a kind of 单数名词单数 this/that kind of 单数名词单数these kinds of 复数名词复数复数名词 of this/that kind 复数sort 与kind 类似a type of 单数名词单数a series of 复数名词复数a class of 复数名词复数the number o
6、f 复数名词单数a number of 复数名词复数Ara-C is one of most important antitumor agents, especially used in the treatment of variousleukaemias.One of possibilities for enhancing the pharmacological properties is to link it to a carrier.Biocompatibility is one of the main criteria for the selection of a particular
7、 biomaterial.3Controlled drug delivery technology represents one of most rapid advancing areas of science inwhich chemists are contributing to human health care.Several models have been proposed but none appear to be generally applicable.None of the presently used ones are applied rigorously.Thus fa
8、r no studies have conclusively demonstrated long-term value of any of the cardiac genetherap approaches.This type of termination is often referred to as spontaneous termination.A number of polymer backbones that are potentially degradable are detailed in the text.The number of mechanisms which have
9、been proposed to explain the stereopecificity ofZiegler-Natta catalysts.* The number of 复数名词: 整个做主语时谓语应为单数; 但此句的动词have 是从句的谓语而从句是形容mechanisms.在其它的从句谓语中也是同样如: One of the mechanisms which have beenA series of telomers reported in table 1 were then synthesized.A diverse range of mechanisms have been de
10、veloped.Polymers are a promising class of biomaterials that can be engineered to meet specific end-userequirements.The most important class of poly(amides) for controlled release are the poly(amino acids).The majority of poly(anhydrides) are prepared by melt-condensation polymerization.A wide variet
11、y of natural and synthetic polymers have been used to fabricate tissue-engineeringmatrices.后面通常要用复数名词 对可数名词而言various differentmost all many severalone of many ofkinds ofa number of the number ofa (wide) variety of a class ofa series of a wide range ofDozens of different types of receptors are presen
12、t on the average mammalian cell.4In a number of special applications (e.g. contact lenses and skin-grafting materials), additionalrequirements such as transparency should be considered when selecting a polymer.Many of these transmembrane proteins are receptors.Some polymers are highly crystalline pr
13、imarily because their structure is conductive to packing,while others are crystalline primarily because of the secondary forces. For still other polymers,both factors may be favorable for crystallization.形容可数名词的量词a few many a number of形容不可数名词的量词a great/small/certain amount of a great/good deal of形容可
14、数和不可数名词均可的量词a lot of lots ofAlthough a few polymers may be completely amorphous and a few completely crystalline, mostpolymers are partially or semi-crystalline in character.The use of IPNs has received a great deal of attention in recent years and different kinds of IPNhave been synthesized with di
15、fferent compositions.The major amount of work on size distributions has been on polyesters and polyimides.A sizeable amount work has been published on the copolymerizations of various cyclicmonomers.以下结构的谓语的数由前一个决定, as well as由较靠近谓语动词的决定not onlybut alsoeitherorneithernor三 冠词冠词是最易犯错误的地方一定要注意否则编辑的负担极重
16、因为每句话都会用到冠词最普通的规则如下单数名词前一般要加冠词 a , the 等但有些情况可不加复数名词前一般可不加冠词 也可加the, these, those.5The molecular weight of a polymer is of prime importance in its synthesis and application.The rate constant can be expressed by an Arrhenius type relationshipK = A e -E/RTWhere A is the collision frequency factor, E t
17、he Arrhenius activation energy, and T the Kelvintemperature. A plot of lnK versus 1/T allows the determination of both E and A from the slopeand intercept, respectively.When a water-insoluble or only slightly water-soluble monomer is added, a very small fractiondissolves and goes into solution. A la
18、rge but still small portion of the monomer enters the interiorhydrocarbon part of the micelles. The largest portion of the monomer is dispersed as monomerdroplets.被修饰的名词前要加 the:There has been a rapidly increasing effort in the last ten to fifteen years toward the synthesis ofnew polymers with marked
19、ly higher temperature resistance than those previously available.The catalysts usually must be prepared at the low temperatures since most of them becomeheterogeneous when prepared at or warmed up to the temperatures above about -40 .四 从句分词不定式这些是写作时常用且必须用到的结构一定要掌握在学术论文中从句分词不定式通常用来作修饰Applications in
20、the relatively new field of tissue engineering, where polymers are used to assistregeneration of three-dimensional tissue structures, are more and more integrated withbiological demands.There are three general synthetic approaches that have been used to produce polymers withincreased thermal stabili
21、ty.If certain symmetry requirements are met, the molecules are able to pack into an ordered, latticearrangement and crystallization occurs. The temperature at which this occurs is Tm.There are at least two mechanisms through which the infectivity of a vector can be blocked.Biodegradable polymers con
22、taining hydrolysable groups in their chains, which aresusceptible to biodegradation to low molecular weight, nontoxic products, have also beenconsidered for controlled drug delivery systems.Polymers possessing high strength, solvent and chemical resistance, and serviceability at hightemperatures wou
23、ld find a variety of uses.6The challenge facing cell and molecular biologists is to decipher how cellular events occur.A general problem encountered in many of the polymerization systems has been a difficulty inobtaining polymers of sufficiently high enough molecular weight to have reasonable streng
24、thproperties.Another approach to obtain rigid polymer chains is by the synthesis of spiro polymers.五 标点英文中一句话结束要用句号 注意避免过长的句子这点与汉语中常用逗号的习惯不同请注意以下结构的标点 such as A and B such as A, B and C , such as A, , for example, , for example ,e.g., ,i.e., , respectively.六 掌握一些学术论文常用的短语结构可大大降低写作的难度In order to meet
25、 all of these criteria, the vector must deliver the gene accurately.To overcome this problem, it would be advantageous to pseudotype lentiviral vectors withtargeted MLV envelopes.Besides identifying suitable proteases for targeting, the success of this protease-targetingstrategy relies on the access
26、ibility of the linker to protease cleavage.We have focused our investigations on the in vitro and in vivo biological response of a mousecell line.On the contrary, the homotelomer derivative 11 exhibits no substantial loss of cytotoxicitycompared to free Ara-C.After more than three decades of develop
27、ment, in which numerous polymers have been used toreplace body parts, clinical success is still relatively rare.7In some cases, polymeric materials for drug delivery must satisfy additional requirements, suchas environmental responsiveness (e.g. pH- or temperature dependent phase or volumetransforma
28、tions.)Owing to the nature of these interactions, surface modification strategies have been used tooptimize specific surface properties.Several approaches to surface modification exist. In general, both chemical and physicalmodifications of the polymeric surface may significantly increase the biocom
29、patibility.A host of new polymers have been developed specially for surgical applications, particularlydrug delivery.For roughly the past three or four decades, biology has been undergoing a revolution towarda quantitative mechanistic understanding of cell and organism behavior.They offer improved m
30、echanical properties and ease of synthesis.Specific gel systems are described in more detail in the following sections.Perhaps the strongest motivation for polymeric delivery systems is that many of the morerecently discovered molecules require delivery at a very localized level due to their mechani
31、smof action.A particular challenge in addressing materials issues for tissue engineering is that the biologicalprocesses are not yet understood well enough to allow a clear set of design parameters to bespecified a priori.Over $20 billion is spent annually on therapeutic management of CHF treatments
32、 alone but theoverall outcome is not highly successful.Unless tissue-specific gene targeting techniques have been developed, intravenous injection ofrecombinant viral vectors is unlikely to be the choice of gene delivery due to systemic infectionand low efficiency of gene transfer.In most instances,
33、 there is some molecular weight range for which a given polymer property willbe optimum for a particular application.The control of molecular weight is essential for the practical application of a polymerizationprocess.Solid polymers differ from ordinary, low molecular weight compounds in the nature
34、 of theirphysical state or morphology.8On the other hand, the highly flexible chain leads to very low values of Tg and Tm.Molecular symmetry of polymer chains also plays an important role in determining Tg and Tm.The reason for this is that the extent of crystallinity developed in a polymer is both
35、kineticallyand thermodynamically controlled while the melting temperature is only thermodynamicallycontrolled.This explains clearly why even the moderately high degree of syndiotacticity present in apolymer such as PMMA is not enough to allow it to crystallize extensively.Polymers vary widely in the
36、ir mechanical behavior depending on the degree of crystallinity, thedegree of crosslinking, and the values of Tg and Tm.The general order of thermodynamic stability of different sized ring structures is, thus, given by3,4,8 to 11 < 7,12 and larger < 5 < 6There are two important aspects with
37、 regard to the control of molecular weight inpolymerizations.The rate constants for these reactions are orders of magnitude greater than those for thecorresponding reactions of the diacid or diester reactants.The discussions until this point have been concerned with the polymerization of bifunctiona